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Open Poetry #49

Transition

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-03-26 03:40 PM

Hinting tints of color
dust the gray tree branches.
Blooms bust open overnight.
Greens creep into fields and lawns.
Birds are chirping with the dawns.
Balmy breezes only tease between
the rains cold and gray.
The sun lingers longer each day.
A season sweet and warm
full of fragrant flowers that charm.
A transition between freeze and heat,
the great outdoors’ meet and greet.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-03-26 03:50 PM

Ehhh . . . A rhyming poem. Very nice one to boot.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

2 posted 2015-03-26 04:05 PM

those first inklings of Spring before all comes fullterm very nice

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2015-03-26 05:53 PM

As lovely as spring days.

Xoxo
A

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

4 posted 2015-03-27 04:05 AM

the gasp of nature that calls the basement dwellers into the open, the bedrooms empty as the weather reveals the great outdoors!

nice poem
RS

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2015-03-29 09:25 PM

Feeling it here too, Lori. I think it's contagious.

Like the rhyme btw.

Michael

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2015-03-29 10:24 PM

Loved the "meet and greet" - I can just seeing Winter telling Spring to "Kiss off!".

Enjoyed my friend,

j.

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