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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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There is a wildness in my heart a fire that burns with warmth and light and sings a song of untamed bliss. My love is wild about me too. There is a calmness in my soul a sacred truth, a strength within that guards me from all harm and wrong. My love exudes a calmness too. There is a lightness in my step, I walk on clouds that bounce in fun. The sun shines through on rainy days. My love is just as happy too. There is a story in my smile of twisting paths of toil and rest and views from mountain tops we’ve reached. My love adores me too. Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine writing (and Romanticism) as always ! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Bruce. Owl |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Owlsa A wonderful way to feel.Love is one thing but when it makes itself known and felt it is everything.Best to you. Jo |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Martyjo! You are so right!  Owl |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
It's brilliant, Diana! Really wonderful and emotive poem! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi diana, your poem offered me happiness, o was in a bad moo, and it has gone after reading, every stanza is a gem, love is everywhere in your steps, brilliant yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Gale! I am glad you liked and enjoyed it so much! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Yann! I am so happy that my poem alleviated your bad mood and brought you happiness! It is strange, but wonderful how happiness is infectious! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So glad to see you happy, Diana. Ida |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"There is a calmness in my soul a sacred truth, a strength within that guards me from all harm and wrong. My love exudes a calmness too." Love this verse. A real expression of love in the entire write, but this verse adds the exclamation mark. Enjoyed the read, Diana. JL |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, JL. That is perhaps my favourite verse too, especially as its last line is the real miracle because it wasn't always so. I am glad you enjoyed the read. You look good as Father Christmas, JL, lol! Owl |
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