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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-11-26 05:58 PM

After summer goes
Snow Birds fly away down south
Apples ripen red

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-11-26 06:31 PM

In southern winters
We welcome the snowbirds here
Warm weather retreat

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2014-11-27 12:44 PM

Hi Lori, so sweet images, harmony of automn reflected by a single fruit, enjoyed it

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2014-11-27 07:09 AM

Jerry,
what a great and thoughtful reply! Thank you so much! Happy Thanksgiving!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2014-11-27 07:16 AM

Yea Yann!
Thank you so much for commenting on my apple. That is exactly why I picked it! It is frustrating sometimes when the "real" people you can share your poetry with (family and friends) don't get those nuances. Bless your heart!

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

5 posted 2014-11-27 02:55 PM

Rich imagery in few lines.
Nicely written, Lori!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2014-11-27 03:52 PM

Thanks Gale!I appreciate the feedback!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2014-11-29 08:31 PM

I think I live in a land of two seasons here... straight from summer to winter. Bleh. I hope you are enjoying the holidays, Lori.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2014-11-30 10:22 AM

Well, I will say that my seasonal dread has lessened to the point that it has opened a door to enjoyment I haven't realized in many years. Uh, I guess that would mean yes, I am enjoying my holidays.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2014-12-01 02:43 PM

Apples ripen, love it!!
Yeah, apple pie with a slice of cheddar and a cup of hot coffee...
I do enjoy this time of year.

JL

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