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Backseat Lovers |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 the street inhales shadows an impish moon made for backseat lovers ahhh . . . your sweet, sweet love you thought it'd n'er get here backseat lovers whispering endearments readily accepted in the heat of the moment singing into her eyes as ancient cypress trees remember the ephemeral winds you speak of the heart as she rides the unicorn you offer the mad hatters dream ©November 22, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wow! You recalled that like it was yesterday! You captured that with all the fresh excitement and discovery of young love. Excellent my friend!  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank Lori. Yep, and it all felt wonderful. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
an 'experience' I never had ... sounds like a grand-fine memory though! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hard to believe you never "made it" in he backseat, Bruce. Thanks for stopping by with that information. Heh.Heh If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I hated it when one of our "footsies" wound up entangled in a seat belt . . . at least we laughed with the moving of the "spirit"... cool, my friend... j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! We didn't have seat belts when I was loving in the backseat. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your sweet memories bring smiles ... and well, here in Italy there was that little Fiat 500 and to "adults" it seemed simply impossible to "perform" any kind of dance in that small space, but young lovers know better ...Great flashback, Jerry! Margherita  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Damn straight young lovers knew better. Gotta love it. Thanks, Margherita. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Lovely writing! Alas, I've got only a bike - impossible to get such experience. But then... I've got my imagination ) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Imagination is good. Heh.Heh If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
First response was a audible chuckle... But oh brother, what problems those backseats could have spawned, so to speak... Enjoyed the read, Jerry! JL |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You're on fire today, JL,thanks. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yeah remember those days too and guess, since I'm only a few years behind you, I guess my backseat "stuff" lasted a little longer than yours (LOL) j |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
So true Jimmy, but it is quality not quantity that matters. Heh.Heh If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
My side was and still is ALL ABOUT "feelings", my friend (which is another word for quality) --- (chuckles) j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hope we aren't getting into an argument here. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Don't know why you'd even assume that --- anyway, 'nuff said on this thread... See ya, j. |
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