»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #49
»
My Feelings
| Open Poetry #49 |
|
My Feelings |
|
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
|
I am so wonderfully attuned to you even asleep my heart is your heart when I look back to the music of childhood dreams it is you only you who danced in my thoughts wonderful lady the loveliest rose on the bush your lips have caressed mine in my dreams my hands are sacred for they have touched the vibrancy of you my love for you is love defined you have given me to myself you win all disagreements even though sometimes I am right your spunk is borne from terror I quite understand and I, dear, dear (insert name here) understand far more than you believe I do please awake me not let me have you in my dreams ©December 1, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
||
| © Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such a lovely declaration, tjis is very sweet and romantic, i loved the (insert a name there), this is so clever yann |
||
|
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You write the sweetest love poems Jerry!  |
||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks Yann for your very nice comments. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Lori , I appreciate your thoughts this morning . . . If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
||
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine Romanticism indeed ! |
||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Bruce. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
