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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-09-16 08:27 AM

I have murmured to you
in those tender times
of gentleness
In that drowsy
before dreams come
I have left my breath
on your neck
in my contentedness
Peaceful sleep comes gently
wrapped in your arms
Dawn draws me
from sweet oblivion
into the awareness
of your warmth
and a longing
for lingering

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-09-16 09:17 AM

Beautifully done . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2014-09-16 11:14 AM

pure and superb Romanticism at its best!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2014-09-16 12:51 PM

Thanks guys! Been a while since I've written anything. glad you liked this one!

Lori

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2014-09-16 01:27 PM

enjoyed
jo

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2014-09-17 06:28 AM

Thanks for the read Jo!

Lori

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2014-09-17 10:46 AM

Pretty pretty poetry...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2014-09-17 01:02 PM

Thank you kindly Blues!

Lori

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2014-09-18 08:46 AM

Gentle and beautiful - well done!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2014-09-18 09:25 AM

Thanks Southern! I like that you used the word "gentle". Now that you have used it, it occurred to me that is exactly the tone I was going for.

Lori

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

10 posted 2014-09-19 06:56 AM

This is sweet. Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

11 posted 2014-09-19 01:22 PM

Thanks for the read Trina! Great to hear from you again!

Lori

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