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Open Poetry #48

Images Of Emotions

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2012-05-01 02:10 AM

Dipping her quill in the old inkwell,
Another story she needs to tell.
Visions and thoughts her mind does seize
As words flow through her quill with ease.

She hopes the reader will understand
When she writes of the moon, sea and land
Heartache and romance you'll also find.
Some true and some fiction float through her mind.

Emotions open and set themselves free,
Creating imagery for you to see.
You sense the joy and pain within her heart
As ink to paper starts to make its mark.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2012-05-01 02:16 AM

Lovely smooth rhyming poetry with many truths about the poetic mind exposed within.
Loved it!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-05-01 02:29 AM

Enjoyed the " Images of Emotions".
ms. e

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2012-05-01 04:56 AM

Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-05-01 06:12 AM

You wrote, "She hopes the reader will understand."

I think we will, for we are in a similar situation, Eloise.

It is wonderful to read other poems, poets I can identify with on some level.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2012-05-01 09:56 AM

This poem in wonderful and flows so perfectly...I could totally identify with your words...A great way to start the day...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2012-06-08 02:55 PM

She hopes the reader will understand

This reader does. *S* Great write!!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2012-06-08 03:09 PM

A poet's poem, Eloise.
Ida

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