Open Poetry #48 |
Loved Ones In Heaven... |
dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
We all came together on this warm April day, to remember our dear friend, in our own special way. Were united in our grief for the loss we all share, and as memories surface, so do the tears. For she was a mother, a friend, and a wife, who gave so much love, to each life, that she touched. So blessed to have known her, at least for a time, can help with the sadness, and bring me a smile. For the people we love, never fully go away, we can find them in a sunrise, or even in, a rainy day. Although we can't see them or feel their special touch. They remain with us in spirit, and in memories we love. RIP AUNT MARY RIP DAD RIP DEBBIE So happy your all together now. Til we meet again. All my love always, Denise |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
This poem is tender with memories...It touched my heart...beautifully written |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Ty Startime, for stopping by today and commenting i always appreciate it! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
So you have a real name, and I like the sound as Denise rolls off my tongue. Thank you for writing this. It has such a feeling of love and the sadness was held back to a minimum as you delighted in praising the woman who has passed on from this planet earth. It was a wonderful, loving epitaph. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
well done |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Jerry, Yes i do have a "real name" not anything special like "dreamgal" Ha! But i am a real person with a name, thank you for stopping by once again, this was for my Aunt Mary, who's funeral was today, thought i'd write a little something for her, nothing dramatic, or thought provoking just a simple write in her memory for a sweet lady. Ponderthepoet, Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read this. Much appreciated. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful, reflections straight from the heart. Words that are hard to come by sometimes yet you've done a marvelous job here. I can understand the depth of your feelings, all have lost loved ones over the years and it hurts deeply. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you so much Eric i appreciate your kind words. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very heartfelt read. Nicely done. |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
Thank you Eloise! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful and touching!! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
This poem brought tears to my eyes...very touching...it helps to know they are together...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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