Walking after the Rainshower

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Open Poetry #48

Walking after the Rainshower

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2012-04-30 01:15 PM

Grass clippings float upon
rain puddles. Cold air glides
through me and colored leaves,
while the clouds let patches
of raindrops fall with each
sigh.
I breathe in nature's
natural scent, which made
me thirst for her sweet watery
nectar and her
wet earth.
I could almost
taste her rocks, her soil,
soft flowers and her
watermelon grass. I
want to keep her pure intoxicating
aroma, but alas a car
pass me by and so does her
sweetness.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-04-30 01:19 PM

Gotta watch out for that exhaust pipe.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2012-05-01 01:23 AM

Nice moment well portrayed in your words.
Amazing how a car can ruin such a beautiful moment. Just goes to show, it's not part of nature's plan.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-05-01 02:47 AM

A sensual poem... enjoyed .
ms. e

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2012-05-01 10:04 AM

Stunningly beatiful...you fill the senses with nature...*grin* and then that car has to come by...well written...I enjoyed the read...

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

5 posted 2012-05-01 03:22 PM

Gorgeous, sensate write...I mean I can smell this poem!

Amaryllis

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