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Mystical Moonlight |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Mystical Moonlight The sky is dark, starlit and clear Wind caresses with gentle warmth The full moon smiles down upon them Waves lap against the sandy shore The unseen world looks on with joy Fairies dancing among tall grass The mermaids frolic on the waves Goddesses watch with pure pleasure The sand is warm beneath their feet While holding hands they stroll along The silence means no need to speak Joined heart and soul by love are they The world for them does not exist Sands twinkle within the starlight The mystical moonlight enfolds These lovers who are not alone Karen Mc Neil April 28, 2012 |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
rather relaxing |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It is the full meaning of love when there is no conversation and they are not embarrassed by it. Nice write, Karen . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Reminded me of a dark fairy tail my mom told me (she was a wee bit sadistic) where faeries would stray children at night to dance with them and when the sun returned they were gone never to return. Lovely poem. -Juju |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic poetry with such vivid images. I can see and feel them there hand in hand. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I love fairies! You took me there Startime and it was wonderful! Lori  |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
ponderthepoetorrsx Thank you fro letting my poem relax you... JerryPat 2 thank you...to me when no words are needed there is true love and understanding... Juju LOL...I am so glad mine don't have that kind of mission in mind...thank you for reading Eric *grin* You know me...I will always be a romantic with a little bit of magic mixed in... Lori I glad I took you there...it is a great place to be... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
exquisite ... pure, simple Romanticism at its very best ... absolutely FINE writing !! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
*blushing*...Thank you...I am glad you enjoyed it |
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