Open Poetry #48 |
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..remnants |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada ![]() |
in these remnants of roots, your relevance is a mirror for my shame we tore down the tree, our hands exchanging the axe ~~ ..(C)2006/2012 Spiros Zafiris ~~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Excellent! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thanks much Jerry..>>very kind you are.. ..>>spiros ~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And this goes outside the confines of nature alone, but to the true inward workings of society. Well done, Spiros! So glad to see you this evening! Thank you so much for your lovely comment on my poem. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Sunshine, 'tis always I who must thank you, for the inspiration and the support..>>spiros ~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh my, how this touches me, dear Spiros. I always caress the remnants of trees, they truly speak to us of our inadequacy with respect to Nature. Excellent work. Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"your relevance is a mirror for my shame"... has meaning between the lines for me. M |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Agreeing with Jerry here, my friend... excellent! j. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Margherita, M, and Mr. Wesley..>>thank you very much for your kindness; your comments are inspirational..>>spiros |
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rabittlover Junior Member
since 2012-04-07
Posts 46 |
Loved your poem Spiros. The trees will be here long after humans are extinct. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..rabittlover..>>nice of you to read ..i enjoyed your comment..>>spiros ~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You got it absolutely right and with a poet's perspective. Great write! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Eric..>>much gratitude..>>spiros ~~ |
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