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Open Poetry #48
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2012-01-25 04:53 PM

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Slugs
Have saints
With swords
As allies

The angels
They are beautiful
In short white dresses

The evil ones
Wear black and fight
With silver chains
Have blue tattoos
On their hairy arms

It seems to be
Eternally
A conflict over
The environment

Or some other thing
Beyond reasoning
As only makes sense
In a winter dream


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JL
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1 posted 2012-01-26 01:42 PM

Great write!
The title drew me in.
That winter dream was stirring.
Enjoyed the read.

JL


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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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2 posted 2012-01-27 11:24 PM

This is very beautifully written. I love the imagery. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

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