Another Fifteen-Word Free-Verse Poem

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Open Poetry #48

Another Fifteen-Word Free-Verse Poem

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-27 03:46 PM

take me
into your web
ply me
with your delights
then
do as you will

©January 27, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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Florida, USA

1 posted 2012-01-27 07:33 PM

This is a really cool poem. Short, sweet and to the point

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-01-27 07:36 PM

Thank you, The_Doctors_Angel_32, for giving my fifteen-word free-verse poem a shot. What part of Florida?

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katahdin
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3 posted 2012-01-27 07:51 PM

Nice!!
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-01-27 07:54 PM

Haha! Thank you, Kat, just fooling around heah.

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

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Spring, Texas

5 posted 2012-01-27 08:51 PM

...said the masochistic fly to the spider ...

enjoyed this my friend; is 15 words just a number you picked in these you're doing???

j.

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-01-27 09:06 PM

Yeah, j, just messing around with the numbers and though fifteen words worked. Thanks for checking it out.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2012-01-27 10:14 PM

very nice Jerry!

Lori

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-01-27 10:25 PM

Thank you Lori.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

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Australia

9 posted 2012-01-27 11:57 PM

ooh delightfully delicious

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-01-27 11:59 PM

Thank you, tracie66. I appreciate your kind words.

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