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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Your Love Wanted to write you a poem That said in molten words What my heart holds for you Wanted to bare my soul So you could see The truth of me Wanted to say In no uncertain terms The way you make me feel But your love Leaves me speechless And takes my breath away LGR©1/25/12 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Lori! This is so nice. Make sure he sees this. I think he will be jumping for joy... JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm with JL. This goes straight into the heart. You have a way of doing that consistently. ~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a beautiful declaration, Lori. Your breathless words make a resounding statement. Michael |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
JL, Jerry and Michael- Hey thanks guys! I'll be sure to show it to him, Thanks for your kind responses Lori |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, this is wonderful!! I hope he loves it as much as I do! |
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