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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2012-01-24 11:55 AM

Somewhere

There is a small area
Somewhere lost, now scattered
Deep away, in reaches unknown
When I was out searching
An understanding home

Guided by angels
Who gathered ‘round
Somewhere, perhaps, there…
Might still be, yet to be found
Traces of letters to angels that roam
Somewhere lost
In a somewhere once home

The lines once written
Of angels that breathed
Were left by me
In state of believe
Lines of encourage
Lines of inspire
Lines that are lost
To someplace much higher

Where are they now?
Heaven only knows
Those thoughts are but wind dust
In reaches unknown.

                                                                       ©Karilea Rilling Jungel
                                                                                10 August 2002

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-01-24 02:11 PM

I've left my share of lines and names and such, Sunshine, but I don't think the angels wanted anything to do with me in those roaming days of mine. This is a sweet poem.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2012-01-24 03:03 PM

Angels can be such an inspiration... There magnificence allow them to shine in an aura of everything good they portry. This poem definately shows that. You should dig through the archives more often.

you'll note that I didn't mention such magnificence also leaves them easy to blame for things gone amiss in the hands of a scorned poet such as myself... Lol

Enjoyed the read.

Michael

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-01-24 05:20 PM

"Where are they now?
Heaven only knows
Those thoughts are but wind dust
In reaches unknown."

And such lovely archives found
covered in cobwebs...

Beautifully written and beautifully
displayed.

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2012-01-24 07:03 PM

I am glad you found your lost lines of inspire in the archives Karilea, they are full of inspire to me! Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
Kit

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2012-01-25 07:19 AM

Beautifully writen, loved the soft feel of this...the calmness...hugs

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

6 posted 2012-01-25 11:20 PM

..yes, i've said it before..no
matter the subject, your poems
always calm one..what happens with me,
at times, i start a short poem,
in my head, while about to fall asleep
..and i say to myself, "i'll remember
these three-four lines in the morning"
..but i seldom do..but, of course, if i
invent 3-4 super lines, i rise to write them down..>>spiros

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2012-01-26 12:27 PM

a breathtaking & inspiring piece, I hung onto each line mesmerised by their gracefulness - loved this sunshiny girl

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2012-01-30 03:26 PM

I'm allergic to dust... but for breathtaking treasures such as this, I'll wade right into the cobwebs... Air is highly overrated... and this is incredible! *S*

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