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Open Poetry #48

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-01-30 08:39 AM

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It is night
That special place

In a thought light
Of moon and stars
Upon an inner strand
The spectral forms
Of what could have been

Two slender figures
Not yet stooped by time
Coupled together
Hand in hand

Only here
Are they ever one
Despite all years
And final renderings

Allow these hearts
Their dreams
That have not gone
Along with youth
Into oblivion

What harm is done
By such fantasies
Consoling loss
Missed opportunity

These mists that drift
Like mutual reveries

From a stolid
Lapping sea

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-01-30 09:26 AM

Allow these hearts
Their dreams
That have not gone
Along with youth
Into oblivion

To continue to dream can well mean salvation ...

I like this much.

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2012-01-30 12:19 PM

v. well 'penned!'

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