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Open Poetry #48

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ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2013-12-15 03:54 PM

I use to think,
That no one cared,

That nature,
Was the sole refuge of man.

It's not.

We make
Our pains
Our joys
Our refuges
Our beauty.

The world itself,
Is not!
But we are,
And give to the world
Its meaning.

And that my friend

Is raw.

Richard

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

1 posted 2013-12-15 05:48 PM

Absolutely! Without a doubt. Righteous! Tellin' like it is!

~*~ Your fences need to be horse-high, pig-tight and bull-strong. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2013-12-16 08:40 PM

nice...James

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2013-12-17 01:17 AM

for sure, we live together, with defaults and qualities, thanks for the accurate and deep poem,

have a nice day

yann

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