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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2013-12-14 09:27 AM

How you love me?
She asked
I love you from the bottom up,
from left to right,
from north to south
and from east to west,
I like you at the middle way,
in the center and in the sun,
I love you as an island,
I love you throughout,
in your nylon stockings,
I love you in Brazil,
How you love me
she asked,
I love you from top to bottom,
from north to south,
I love you as an imbecile
who lost its map,
I love you as an imbecile
who reads a complicated book

Amaryllis2
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since 2013-12-08

Posts 27

1 posted 2013-12-14 09:45 AM

Oh I love this! Charming, sweet and touching!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2013-12-14 09:57 AM

thanks amaryllis, it is the way i feel sometimes, when loves seems inunderstandable, appreciated you kind comment

yann

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2013-12-14 10:51 AM

This is beautiful, Yann. This is as it should be, but so very seldom is.

Owl

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
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4 posted 2013-12-14 10:57 AM

Thanks diana, your wirds really touched me, and also the true constatation of all of et,

have a nice day

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2013-12-14 12:23 PM

You made me smile with this very lovely romantic poem, dear Yann.

When we think of ourselves to be imbeciles with our attitude in love, the total blind devotion is already at risk, for otherwise we wouldn't think in that way. Of course we are not imbeciles, we just live in the clouds of bliss, where any judgment is impossible.

I love this very much and I am happy for you and your source of inspiration.

Margherita

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

6 posted 2013-12-14 03:23 PM

Interesting, nice metaphor

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2013-12-14 05:10 PM

A charming poem, yann. Hope it is always true for you.
Ida

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2013-12-14 06:20 PM

Ah, nice, my friend. Not real sure imbecile is the word you wanted, but maybe I just don't know all it's uses, and haven't looked it up lately. Enjoyed . . .

j.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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9 posted 2013-12-15 01:00 AM

thanks ponderthepoetorrsx, for the comprenhensive comment ,

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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10 posted 2013-12-15 01:01 AM

thanks ida, it is not always true, but some days it can be this gentle way,

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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11 posted 2013-12-15 01:03 AM

thanks jwesley, I think it is the right word for me sometimes, when i feel stupid about love, thanks for the appreciated tone of humor,

have a nice day

yann

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

12 posted 2013-12-15 02:13 AM

Oh, the mystique of a woman!!

In that respect...

all men are imbeciles...lol.

CG

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
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13 posted 2013-12-15 05:47 AM

Love this, Yann. Very tender.

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

14 posted 2013-12-15 08:44 AM

Yann
your poem is a perfect reflection of genuine love. Love flies in the face of logic as it fills the heart and consumes the mind. It makes imbeciles of us all. To be dumbstruck in love is the most joyous state of being. I am happy that you not only experience it, but have the awareness to put it into words. You are blessed.

Lori

2islander2
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15 posted 2013-12-15 12:20 PM

thanks castleguard for the comment (smile), but when it concerns women, men are a little disapointed, i must confess that wuth humility

yann

2islander2
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16 posted 2013-12-15 12:21 PM

thanks alison, enjoyed your kind comment,

yann

2islander2
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17 posted 2013-12-15 12:23 PM

thanks lori, your persuasive comment concvince me about that genuine love which is not a quiet river,
enjoyed your accurate and lovely words

yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2013-12-16 08:32 PM

very nice...James

2islander2
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19 posted 2013-12-17 01:32 AM

thanks james

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