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Open Poetry #48
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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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0 posted 2013-12-11 04:46 PM


I'e always wondered about those eyes,
what is it that they look at?
what is it that they see?

what lies beyond those windows
cloaked, veiled in mystery?

Richard
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Amaryllis2
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since 2013-12-08
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1 posted 2013-12-11 04:48 PM

Interesting Fun little read...Enjoyed
ponderthepoetorrsx
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2 posted 2013-12-11 05:00 PM

it used to be a bigger poem but i've revised it since i feel a lotof it no longer applied, and wll it turned into  this. thanks
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