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from the archives: "eyes"

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2013-12-11 04:58 PM

Those eyes
Those but average eyes,
That calm my soul,
That quench my hate,
that fuel the firesof my heart.

what is it about those eyes,
Those but average eyes,
That causes
my heart to leap,
my mind to dream,
and my soul to sing?

Richard

paderewski
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since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

1 posted 2013-12-11 06:41 PM

They are searching eyes, searching your own, maybe?

~*~ If we are what we eat, she's fast, easy and cheap. ~*~

Gale
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since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

2 posted 2013-12-12 03:58 AM

I love this poem and can relate to )
Thank you for sharing!

Sorry that I'm late, but I wonder if there is a typo in "firesof"? Maybe a space?

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

3 posted 2013-12-12 05:02 AM

Yes it is

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