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Open Poetry #48

bad words dancing

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2013-11-20 08:04 AM

you measured me
with your mouth
and hands

and said bad words
out loud
for long moments

you put on your animal
and wore her
just for my eyes only

I took her roughly
she purred her song
she growled sigh pleasure

you were a lioness then
when your woman
took away your lady

and left me under your skin

_____________

daark

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

1 posted 2013-11-20 11:07 AM

An interesting piece,
very passionate!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2013-11-20 02:03 PM

Gale,,,thank you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2013-11-30 09:17 PM

nice...James

KentAshbyKorb
Member

since 2013-05-05

Posts 99
Nc USA

4 posted 2013-12-01 12:46 PM

Well written!!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2013-12-10 12:54 PM

~~smiling here~~

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2013-12-11 05:36 AM

and left me under your skin

Passionate reminiscing here, dear D.! Memories can indeed linger forever under layers of skin.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Amaryllis2
Junior Member

since 2013-12-08

Posts 27

7 posted 2013-12-11 04:54 PM

Hello DS. Captivating, as always

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