Open Poetry #48 |
Leftovers |
Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Leftovers I¡¦ll ¡§make¡¨ some leftovers. Leftovers are really easy to ¡§make.¡¨ You only have to heat them up to ¡§make¡¨ them And, after that, the leftovers are ¡§made.¡¨ I don¡¦t have to ¡§make¡¨ Cinamin spice hot tea, Because the tea kettle ¡§makes¡¨ it for me. All I have to do is put tea and water in it. I don¡¦t even have to ¡§make¡¨ the water Because the sink does it for me And then the kettle and the tea ¡§make¡¨ themselves After they are put on the stove. Why, is this not so, Ali??? Jaime ƒº |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Leftovers I'll "make" some leftovers. Leftovers are really easy to "make". You only have to heat them up to "make" them. And, after that, the leftovers are "made". I don't have to "make" Cinnamon spice hot tea, Because the tea kettle "makes" it for me. All I have to do is put tea and water in it. I don't even have to "make" the water Because the sink does it for me. And then the kettle and the tea "make" themselves After they are put on the stove. Why, is this not so, Ali??? Leftovers are known to taste even better than the original! And aren't there quite some reasons to be grateful for? Water, above all!! I hope Ali will see this and gift us with her presence here. Enjoy your cinnamon tea, dear Jaime. Love, Margherita ps the color you used for the text was too light, so I quoted it with another color. "Love is the One who masters all things; I am mastered totally by Love." (Rumi) |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
Creation brings satisfaction i suppose, never the less the poem has sound structure and is over all well done |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Yes, I agree that leftovers usually taste better the second time around.I had a brother in law that would not eat anything, "left over", but I always thought he did not know what he was missing. Best to you Jamie. JO Perry |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ah, Jaime, what a delightful series of observations. Why is that not so? Such an interesting question. Perhaps it has to do with magic more than physics. Perhaps, magical things happen when we take the time to see the results. Who knows. I don't. BUT, I do know that you make me smile and your writing brings magic to MY world. That's an important contribution to my life, Jaime. Merry Christmas, dear friend. Ali |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
we have to be grateful for a lot of things, indeed, this is the kind of leftovers that taste rich and precious, i very love your poem, and the subtle tone of your words, have a nice day yann |
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