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Sometimes Life Is A Bowl of Cherries
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Sometimes Life Is A Bowl of Cherries |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes Life Is A Bowl of Cherries When I eat blueberries I think of how delicious is my sweethearts kiss. When I eat cucumbers I think of the beauty of my honeys skin. When I eat dark chocolate I remember how she melts in my mouth. When I eat tomatoes I am reminded of how squeezable she is when she presses tight against me, and when I eat cherrys I remember all the times we shared a delicious bowl and neither of us could stop until we ate the last drop. JamesLee 21November 2013 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
superbe images of fruits with love, thanks a lot yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you 2islander2 for the nice response...James |
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KentAshbyKorb Member
since 2013-05-05
Posts 99Nc USA |
You're effectively making me pine for my love! And she awe! She is not pining so much for me! At least I don't thing she is! Ad she is a big bowl of life! "Cherries" I love it! |
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KentAshbyKorb Member
since 2013-05-05
Posts 99Nc USA |
If I may? "How delicious my sweethearts kiss is" may give a rhyme desirable to the poem! Nonetheless I love the way it reads. And pardon me if my thought seems vulgar. I do try not to be loose with such things! |
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