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mvvenkataraman
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0 posted 2013-10-25 09:47 PM




Can I suggest you to be noble, dear man?
Shall I insist that you must have will?
Why you criticize all under the holy Sky?
For improvement or just cruel enjoyment?

People must love one another, not topple
Extension of affection is what I mention
Nobility only is the most sacred quality
Show it to all and make the World glow

In case, to love, now, you hopefully begin
All problems will very quickly turn small
Difference of opinion ends via conferences
Thorough understanding helps us finely grow

View all as your friends and try to rescue
Enemy is none and so feel not gloomy
Unite this World proving love's might
Sweep the heart to very cleanly keep

Deep affection will produce peaceful sleep
Sincere prayer makes the Lord interfere
Reduction of others' burden is a fine action
Kindness is classified by God as holiness.

mvvenkataraman


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2013-10-29 07:08 AM


Can I suggest you to be noble, dear man?
Shall I insist that you must have will?
Why you criticize all under the holy Sky?
For improvement or just cruel enjoyment?

People must love one another, not topple
Extension of affection is what I mention
Nobility only is the most sacred quality
Show it to all and make the World glow

In case, to love, now, you hopefully begin
All problems will very quickly turn small
Difference of opinion ends via conferences
Thorough understanding helps us finely grow

View all as your friends and try to rescue
Enemy is none and so feel not gloomy
Unite this World proving love's might
Sweep the heart to very cleanly keep

Deep affection will produce peaceful sleep
Sincere prayer makes the Lord interfere
Reduction of others' burden is a fine action
Kindness is classified by God as holiness.


Every line deserves deep attention, dear Poet, this is very wise and very beautiful. May we all awaken to love and kindness!

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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