Open Poetry #48 |
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aurola moon |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
with the whisper mystery of dawn her aurola moon jutting uncovered round protruding and then you smile at the color like the spelling could be areola sounds but your arms are crossed as if tempting before you reach for coffee by accident and ask me what I imagine at that moment about how it tastes with cream and sugar as the residue that lingers for hours and could I handle a second cup if offered ________ Dark |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You have done it again. Caught my eye, caught my imagination and made my coffee so much spicier. Thanks for the morning peek. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Ali-san...always a pleasure to share a morning sipsation with you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So good to read you once again D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E...thank you |
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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
I could just imagine how potent that second cup would be I really liked these thoughts and descriptions |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
PG...thank you for the review |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
![]() Now, what about a dessert serving, created by you ... I think we can handle it? This is lovely. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
And a well placed chuckle for the end. ![]() |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
~~ Nice ~~ Its been a long time Thank You |
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