Open Poetry #48 |
My Boy |
rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
My Boy I want to wrap you in a happy dream Always see those eyes shine and gleam I will try to make sure your giggles stay And I will surround you in love every day I love your smile so big and bright It fills my heart with love and light I remember the first day I held you close And counted your little fingers and toes I never thought I could love so much My heart and soul felt true love's touch I never imagined I could love you more You are the one that I truely adore I'm a mom and I'm the luckiest one because I get to call you my son Thats my boy -- Used to be rosepetals25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals36 (10-10-2013 11:07 PM).] |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Mother's love! It's a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing ) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow, Tara. He's so grown up already! M |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
He is my world. And yes he is getting so big!! He is already 6... it seems like yesterday I was counting those fingers and toes! -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...James |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
You sing a familiar and sweet song that all mothers know by heart upon that moment of a child's birth |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Thank you for reading James and Emma -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) |
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mvvenkataraman Member
since 2011-11-12
Posts 72India |
The poem is touching and healing Your love for your kid is lovely Almost all the mothers are like that God can't be everywhere, so mothers, Your poem about your boy is pure gold As rhymes are beautifully arranged Best of luck both as a mom and a poet. mvvenkataraman |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Wonderful poem of mothers love. I feel the same way about my son too. Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And did your boy's eyes shine brightly when he read your enthusiastic poem or maybe when you read it to him with your voice of love? Yes, your heart speaks for every mother, beautifully so! Margherita |
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