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rosepetals36
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0 posted 2013-10-10 08:04 PM




My Boy


I want to wrap you in a happy dream
Always see those eyes shine and gleam

I will try to make sure your giggles stay
And I will surround you in love every day

I love your smile so big and bright
It fills my heart with love and light

I remember the first day I held you close
And counted your little fingers and toes

I never thought I could love so much
My heart and soul felt true love's touch

I never imagined I could love you more
You are the one that I truely adore

I'm a mom and I'm the luckiest one
because I get to call you my son


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Thats my boy  


-- Used to be rosepetals25      

[This message has been edited by rosepetals36 (10-10-2013 11:07 PM).]

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Gale
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since 2013-06-10
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1 posted 2013-10-11 06:53 AM


Mother's love!
It's a beautiful poem!
Thank you for sharing )

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2013-10-11 08:04 AM


wow, Tara. He's so grown up already!

M

rosepetals36
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3 posted 2013-10-11 05:32 PM


He is my world. And yes he is getting so big!! He is already 6... it seems like yesterday I was counting those fingers and toes!


-- Used to be rosepetals25 :)

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2013-10-19 09:12 PM


very nice...James
EmmaRose
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5 posted 2013-10-20 10:22 PM


You sing a familiar and sweet song that all mothers know by heart upon that moment of a child's birth
rosepetals36
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6 posted 2013-10-20 10:35 PM


Thank you for reading James and Emma

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :)

mvvenkataraman
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7 posted 2013-10-25 09:51 PM


The poem is touching and healing
Your love for your kid is lovely
Almost all the mothers are like that
God can't be everywhere, so mothers,
Your poem about your boy is pure gold
As rhymes are beautifully arranged
Best of luck both as a mom and a poet.

mvvenkataraman

katahdin
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8 posted 2013-10-26 12:51 PM


Wonderful poem of mothers love. I feel the same way about my son too. Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Margherita
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9 posted 2013-10-29 08:11 AM


And did your boy's eyes shine brightly when he read your enthusiastic poem or maybe when you read it to him with your voice of love?

Yes, your heart speaks for every mother, beautifully so!

Margherita


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