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Open Poetry #48

Not I

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2013-10-25 12:18 PM

I see you once had life
when I gaze into your eyes
others fear you
not I
I want to be like you
have felt you watching
heard your whispers
in my blood
swirling mind
full of you
spinning heart
longing for, what
show me
come to me
let me remind you
of what you long
life

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2013-10-26 12:48 PM

Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

2 posted 2013-10-26 09:54 AM

I like your poem very much!
It's deep and well written, and touching )

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2013-10-29 11:54 AM

~~ Thank You ~~~~
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