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Open Poetry #48

A Red Panty Line

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-10-28 12:15 PM

Sumac peeking out along the edge of tweed trouser trees
A red panty line flashing above brown corduroy fields
Fall flirting in her flaming maple hair

LGR(C)10/28/13

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

1 posted 2013-10-28 12:22 PM

Yes indeed, this has your name written all over it, Lori. You have a way with words which changes your poetry from the simple words of the changing of the season to one with dash and flash, with a bit of sensuousness thrown in for cause and effect. Superb!

~*~ Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-10-28 12:26 PM

Thanks Paddy! Makes me feel good when i write something and someone says it is recognizable as me.

Lori

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2013-10-29 08:08 AM

I love your pen's poetic report here, dear Lori. Such great imagery!

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-10-29 02:05 PM

Thank you dear lady! Bet you didn't think you were going to be reading about trees and dirt, huh?!

Lori

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