Open Poetry #48 |
An Appearance of Dawn |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
an appearance of dawn motionlessness the heavens seem mocking my over-indulgent fantasy about existence, demise, sleep are the previous monotonous resonance of old unchanging thoughts my inner self harmonious with yours we are two spirits if you believe in spirits we are the endless flourishing entities within our boundaries so, here I sit looking out my window as the sun creeps into view wondering if spirits can break down barriers and speak with one another can touch to feel the pulsating pounding of two hearts as one (c)October 15, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
A lovely sentiment, the asking of if two spirits can break down barriers. I believe they can, when we are believers |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, Emma for your thoughts on the spirit question, I very much appreciate them. ~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James. |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
And I enjoyed it much, if the word "enjoyed" fits that state of my mind. I mean that there is something in your poem which I can relate to. Thank you for sharing! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Gale. It is always good to hear that a reader has related to something I wrote. I appreciate it. ~*~ Your past is just a story. Once you realize this, it has no power over you. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is beautiful questioning, Jerry. And I do not doubt that spirits can "break barriers". Whoever truly loves, knows this to be true. Very compelling. Margherita |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Thank you Margherita, and yes, this is JerryPat2, I had to go to this name because I can't log on with the other. ~*~ Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a rather important question indeed! fine blend of Philosophy and Romanticism |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Thanks Bruce, I had trouble with the JerryPat2 name, so I'm having to deal with it using another name. I appreciate your read and comments. ~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~ |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
this is fine write Jerry.Like your concept of boundaries and spirits! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Thank you, Prasad, I am having trouble with the JerryPat2 name so I have gone to this one. I appreciate your comments. ~*~ Who remembers Pete Best? He was the drummer before Ringo Starr ~*~ |
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