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Open Poetry #48

Meital - My Blood

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-10-13 12:06 PM

I remember her brown eyes
through the picket fences
the way her legs used to move through winds draft
like polyester falling off a sweaters fringes

Braids of her smile
tracing back to the north
where her mother used to move the rockies
to where their backyard rested

Her name was Meital;
the brown, golden heiress
the envy of May
the touch of such
that fingers often fell to the floor in droves
with her heart onto the beaches wide open air

I loved her
until she finally passed
archway, white, kneeling to the ocean
arms crossed around her peaceful chest.

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2013-10-20 10:03 PM

a bit of mystery and a lot of pretty to this poem that moved me as I read

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2013-11-02 06:56 PM

Thanks, Emma. Happy you enjoyed. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

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