Open Poetry #48 |
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Sacrifices made from the Dead Sea to the foreign land of the Western Front |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
She was so young and restless with the wind her blonde curves, twirls of the Dead Sea with her mothers numbers engrained for far too long. She was such a beautiful young woman, so full of life that sometimes its those that take the world for granted those that take that too much up of the worlds joy that disallow others to feel the joy she should have left The ballet dancer with her wrists; tiny shaped upwards towards the bedroom ceiling as her white contour dress fit perfectly slightly above her knees as it settled into her skin. For the beauty of a woman never loses its youth and she, young and vital, mother; the woman who took me to school with her heart in another country in another place where her real life should have been and through the cracks and creaks of the wall the fights with the blood that ran through her own family became tormented as their color began to fade over the years I hope one day that face will finally brighten will feel the joy of life For at the sake of her happiness I would concede love and all of my friendships just so she could experience nirvana for once in her life So here is my promise my ode to silence; I will succeed just so I can show her that it was all worth it the journey the sacrifices to leave her homeland where the honey still drips and the humidity still rips through June just so I know she finally got to saw the sun rise with her eyes still young and beautiful thriving, running through the small right side of her grandmas cherry tomato fields just as she did when she was a small child. |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
So heartful and beautiful! Thank you for sharing! |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thanks, Gal. Happy you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the compliment. Cheers Tomer |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thanks, James. Happy you enjoyed, bud. Cheers Tomer |
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