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Waiting Room
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Waiting Room |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Shut up long ago, a dark mind room, overgrown within, decay, rust, opaque light strangled by briars, casting razor wire silhouettes onto flaking walls. Sitting without motion, space filling with black foliage, nightshade deadly from moonlit beams shone onto my mouldering clothing, concealing swan white skin,surely my wait cannot be long? Infinite rest my blissful velvet release, exhaling myself to coruscating eternal rapture. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
wow! this cries out with those dark places of doom and despair that I don't want to know of, but hurts o so good  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well written, my friend. Loved the phasing; absolutely dead-on. Much enjoyed. j. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
powerful (dark) 'penning!' |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
"Powerful" - it's true! "Shut up long ago, a dark mind room" It's such a familiar place ) |
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