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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2013-09-22 03:31 AM


ONCE UPON A TIME IN AFRICA
11 August 2013

Somewhere far away
over the oceans wide,
while the daylong rain,
pelting at first,
has softened
into a slow dirge
and continues to paint
the windows
heavy with mixed emotions,
as the day draws
to a close,
somebody is wrapped up
in a movie whose
once-upon-a-time is
“I once had a farm in Africa.”

Owl

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2013-09-22 09:47 AM


Says so much about the desires of the heart, Diana.
                              Ida

Krawdad
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2 posted 2013-09-22 12:40 PM


Didn't have to read your poem to know what it was going to refer to.

One of my all-time favorites for many reasons: talent, story, scenes, production, direction, music.  Seems to have it all.
Watched it many times and will again.

Movie as poetry?

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2013-09-22 01:20 PM


sounds like an interesting choice of respite on a dismal, glowering kind of day. (It was
a similar day yesterday ... here in the ancient 'endless' mountains of old Appalachia)

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2013-09-22 06:11 PM


Thank you, Ida.  You are very perspicacious.  Smiles.

Thank you, Ed.  I am glad it evoked such pleasure for you, especially at this sad time.  I haven't watched it myself.  I can't remember if my friend mentioned its title - I will have to ask him, or look up his email about it.  However, the description from the two of you, is wonderful.  I love references to my beloved continent and/or country.  

Thank you, Bruce.  Apparently it was!  Sorry you didn't have it to watch yesterday.

Owl

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