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Hardest Love
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Hardest Love |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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through the years decades centuries even skin to skin soft kisses where they do so much good lovers . . . are eternally destined true lovers . . . are never tattered always living with that spark the same one which attracted them in the beginning the durable love (c)September 16, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
it is true, you can see it in their eyes when they look at each other, even after a half century or more of being together. My parents are like that. With such a good example you wouldn't think it would take me so many times to try to get it right. Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. As far as living up to the example, sometimes we just have to carve our life out in our own way, as disjointed as it may be sometimes. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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poetically ghetto Member
since 2004-01-20
Posts 100 |
you have to fight for that right to have that durable unconditional love a smooth reminder by a poetic man |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, you do have to fight for your wonderful love, PG . . . Thank you very much for your special comments. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Mugwamp New Member
since 2013-09-22
Posts 8 |
A nice write. A stand out love poem! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate the nice comment, Mugwamp, thank you very much. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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