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Open Poetry #48

Sweater Weather

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-09-22 11:06 AM

At last
the dawn has arrived
with chill in tow
The promise of comfy soft sleeves
and warm cuddling comforters
on the 'morrow
The death of unbearable sweat
is finally met
I am free to be in
the shorten sun again
My monochromatic green horizon
slowly show variegated leaves
In the autumn
I am revived
LGR(C)9/22/13

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-09-22 11:15 AM

I feel you will have many who can relate to this "cooling" poem of yours this morning. I, too, love autumn and what it brings . . . Very well worded poetry, Lori!

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-09-22 11:18 AM

Thank you my friend!

~L

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

3 posted 2013-09-22 09:07 PM

lori there is nothing better than an autumn breeze and nothing better than you writing an ode to remind us of that reliable sweater

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-09-22 10:48 PM

My favorite time of year Eric.

Lori

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