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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2013-09-19 02:16 PM





In these changing
and uncertain times
one wonders why
It has to be

Somewhere someone’s
something is being
torn asunder

Natural disaster’s
survival of the fittest
come and go
with matters
of the heart…

Broken by fate


LGR©5/6/11,13

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-09-19 02:54 PM


I don't know if it is fate that broke it or more of a human problem, but the result I guess is the same. Heartache and heartbreak.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-09-19 03:15 PM


The people in Colorado came to mind. I can't imagine the pain of losing everything.
Good to "see" you

Lori

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2013-09-19 05:29 PM


So true, Lori. Fate can be cruel.
                             Ida

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4 posted 2013-09-20 03:22 AM


the funny thing is that I am always willing to go on a date with fate its like were suckers for punishment smooth impactful write
OwlSA
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5 posted 2013-09-20 04:11 AM


. . . the yin and the yang not existing without each other, I suppose, Lori . . .

Owl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2013-09-20 10:29 AM


Ida
Yes, it can.  Thanks for the read.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2013-09-20 10:33 AM


Eric
Tell me, how does one avoid a date with fate? You may be a sucker, but I'm a glutton.
Thanks for the read and compliment.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2013-09-20 10:34 AM


Owl, point taken. Have to have the dark to appreciate the light. Good to see you.

Lori

jwesley
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9 posted 2013-09-20 10:59 AM


FATE?

If your beliefs go there, is not fate just a trumped up word for Karma?  I think maybe we all earn our "fate".  

In another sense though . . . (and don't misunderstand: I'm a deeply "faithful" person - one that still believes I'm "allowed" to question). . . but what kind of God, so wonderful and pure and loving, would allow his children to go through some of what they do -

Would you, as a parent, allow the same to happen with your children, if you were omnificent?


jimmy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2013-09-20 11:53 AM


Jimmy
opening a can of worms here. Karma is still learning from your mistakes in a round about way.  Good parents (if you want to go with a God analogy)let their children learn from their mistakes but try to keep them from making fatal ones. Just as I do not believe natural disasters are Karma or the wrath of God. Stuff happens and we get the opportunity to learn (even in our suffering)  and then use that knowlege to reach out to others.

Lori

jwesley
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11 posted 2013-09-20 01:18 PM


Ha! Good (more or less expected) answer Lori!
And about as deep as I'm going to get into a philosophical discussion on here.

You made it fun though, as far as it goes - enjoyed.

jimmy

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