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Open Poetry #48

Next Time Forever

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

0 posted 2013-10-25 05:13 AM

Next Time Forever (for OwlSA )

Next time a ship crosses your bows or more
He may dive overboard to swim to your door

When your heart skips a beat under the stars above
Catch the falling one and wish you are in love

When a man tells you it is Monday
Does it really matter just live for the day

And if a man takes out a carving knife
Carve out your names on bark , move on enjoy the life

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2013-10-25 05:23 AM

Giggles, Michael! And laughter as well! Thank you. I love this. I am still laughing.

It ain't gonna happen though. No man falls in love with a 67-year old woman, not for long anyway, as I have recently discovered, but your poem was really fun!

Owl

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

2 posted 2013-10-26 09:26 AM

I like this!

And I believe it can be so with such a person, proud (in the finest sense), but very kind.
Diana, you are worth it.
Amen!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2013-10-26 12:45 PM

Galina, that is so sweet of you! You are very kind yourself. Smiles.

Owl

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2013-10-28 01:49 PM

Enjoyed this my friend...and right you are.

j.

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