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Open Poetry #48

Octobers farm lit skies

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-09-10 04:03 PM

The auburn threads
of the october fields
where a man wedged his pitchfork
into the mud
with blue spread
patches of dirt
on each leg,
soils great gift

His wife
Peggy Sue
the crock pot, boiling
the stew that carried its air
through the talent of the night
his heart on the side of her hairs crown
the way a woman can even a dry mans grin

Her small shirt,
a little above her belly button
with the floral parade of colors
that covered the titles of the suns light

Little drips of water
nicking the bottom of the kitchen sink
with the pitch of the faucet
running in the background
to the sunsets shy departure.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2013-09-10 10:22 PM

nice...James

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

2 posted 2013-09-11 02:52 AM

that was picture perfect and the image which formed was whimsical and thought inducing. real solid flow to your words

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2013-09-13 01:27 PM

James-

Thanks so much. Hope you're well, bud.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2013-09-13 01:29 PM

Poetically-

Thank you for the kind words. Fluidity is very much of how poetry can run on all cylinders.

Cheers

Tomer

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