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Open Poetry #48

cobblestone road

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-09-09 03:43 PM

The sky met Gods breath
her eyes touched the floor
for the decadence of the wall
would lose itself to her white dress

So she touched the undercut of her belly
through the storm
of the easy western snow

With a wish in the sky
she felt the under colors of
the black midnight dress
of the cobblestone floor
where the alcoves
met the corners of the land
and he could set her eyes
alongside her unflinching stare.

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

1 posted 2013-09-10 04:07 AM

some deep stuff you wrote here absolutely no critiques are permitted you really created a scene which I could envision not an easy thing to create

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2013-09-13 01:52 PM

Poetically-

I'm happy I could take you there. Thank you for the kind words, happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2013-09-13 02:02 PM

Poetically-

I'm happy I could take you there. Thank you for the kind words.

Cheers

Tomer

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