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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-09-04 05:12 PM




The constant of the constellations
above above and beyond the moon
you are
to me
my love

The strength of the four winds
gentle as the breezes
you are
to me
my love

Sure as any yesterday that was
the hope in every tomorrow
you are
to me
my love

LGR(C)9/4/13



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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-09-04 05:20 PM


This is such an absolutely touching poem, Lori. You have a way of communicating that is utterly mystical.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2013-09-04 05:21 PM


ooooh thanks Jerry

Lori

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2013-09-12 12:04 PM


Awww...love is all that.

Sweetly done...Lori.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2013-09-12 07:08 AM


Thanks Blues it is always good to hear from you! Nice was to start my day.  Hugs!
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
5 posted 2013-09-12 08:15 AM


This is sweet....as you are to me...
Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
6 posted 2013-09-12 08:36 AM


real warm and fuzzy, that good stuff that sustains our hope in the wonder of Love
poetically ghetto
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since 2004-01-20
Posts 100

7 posted 2013-09-12 05:49 PM


you are to me my charm this was fun and executed quite well
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
8 posted 2013-09-13 11:12 PM


Trina, EmmaRose and Pghetto- Y'all are way too kind. Bless your hearts! Thanks for the read, it means a lot.

Lori

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