Open Poetry #48 |
Daiseys (for my Mother on her 84th Bithday) |
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Daiseys are her favorite I don't know why Maybe it is simply their understated elegance that delights her eye Could it be the dainty white of its many petals or the sunshine yellow of its soft middle Perhaps the cheerful nature of it's countnance the happy bobbing of heads in the breeze where her joy does lie Daisey are her favorite I don't know why LGR (C) 9/1/13 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Whatever the reason, I feel she will present you with a grateful smile. Eighty-four. Ten years older than me. Something to shoot for. I enjoyed his. ~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
She has already blessed me with her laughter this morning....I told her I would not be able to give her 84 birthday swats or my arm would fall off and I couldn't give her 84 birthday kisses or my lips would fall off. She also laughed when I sang her happy birthday (if you have ever heard my sing you'd know why) Lori |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so exquisite, i love the "i don't know why", it adds grandeur and emotion to the words. Thanks lori, yann |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
My mom Rose, 85 years young, loves roses Yours the daisies, we are lucky ladies to still enjoy their sweet fragrances |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You are most welcome Yann, thank YOU! Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
EmmaRose you are so right, we ARE lucky ladies! Hugs to you and your Mom. Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...congratulations on her 84th...James |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I loved this, Lori, The perspective of one watching someone else draw joy from something, while not truly not understanding the whys and the hows of it, is like the sum of the lifelong equation that is me. Much enjoyed. Michael |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you both James and Michael! It is always good to see you both! Lori |
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