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swampguy
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0 posted 2013-08-17 01:24 PM


you are the splendor
of your being and the essence
of the bold moon
although you reside on earth
your memoirs
place you within the constellations
you are as one with your soul
you are my life's blood
my heart's delight
within your love and pleasurable moments
you are my bliss
my refuge from storms
you are mysterious and transcendent
a cut above
within yourself you allowed me to see
you are my source
my desire

©August 2, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ The heart does not go backward, only the mind. ~*~

[This message has been edited by swampguy (08-18-2013 04:05 PM).]

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Michael
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1 posted 2013-08-17 05:41 PM


Sounds like you got it bad, Jer... and that's definately a good thing.     Your softer side is shining.

Michael

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2013-08-17 06:05 PM


The pure passion you write of is spellbinding.

One of your best!!!

swampguy
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3 posted 2013-08-17 08:26 PM


Michael, you are absolutely correct, my friend. I see you have posted. I'm on it.

~*~ The heart does not go backward, only the mind. ~*~

swampguy
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4 posted 2013-08-17 08:28 PM


Thank you Blues for your nice comment, it is appreciated.

~*~ The heart does not go backward, only the mind. ~*~

[This message has been edited by swampguy (08-17-2013 09:36 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2013-08-18 01:46 PM


Can't say it enough Jerry...love looks good on you. (takes the years right off you)


Lori  

swampguy
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6 posted 2013-08-18 05:00 PM


Thanks a lot, Lori. You always seem to know the right thing to say.

~*~ I got a job at a bakery because I kneaded dough. ~*~

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2013-09-04 10:18 PM


fine writing...James
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