Open Poetry #48 |
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Alive In My Dreams |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alive In My Dreams For now I see the woman that I love in my dreams. Her hand interwined within mine so many times. In the presence of her essence so lovely so precious. Magnificent meadows gorgeous streams her beautiful smile alive in my dreams. JamesLee 11August 2013 |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
It may be all we have . . . |
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swampguy Member
since 2013-08-04
Posts 83 |
Dreams can become our nightmares. ~*~ The heart does not go backward, only the mind. ~*~ |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Beautiful and heartbreaking... "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
so ... what's the 'magic secret' to receive those kind of dreams?! lovely 'penning' indeed! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Dreams are a hard thing for mere mortals to live up to. Hope you're searching for perfect imperfections. Lori ![]() |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
JamesM - The brain can mix what we've been thinking of in the back of our mind with what we've been thinking all day and manufacture a dream. It's amazing how we can feel just as alive in it as when awake. I guess it's all a matter of the strongest desires that surface for impact, like someone loved, and the brain's synaptic readiness to go to work on a dream. Most intriquing write and I enjoyed it James. Namyh |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Still the romantic I see. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Krawdad, swampguy, morning star, secondhanddreampoet, Lori Namyh and Larry for the nice responses...I wrote this after thinking of the way I feel when she takes my hand and smiles at me...James |
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