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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2013-08-13 11:13 PM


Alive In My Dreams

For now
I see the woman
that I love
in my dreams.

Her hand interwined
within mine
so many times.
In the presence
of her essence
so lovely
so precious.

Magnificent meadows
gorgeous streams
her beautiful smile
alive in my dreams.

JamesLee
11August
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Krawdad
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1 posted 2013-08-14 12:51 PM


It may be all we have . . .
swampguy
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2 posted 2013-08-14 07:33 AM


Dreams can become our nightmares.

~*~ The heart does not go backward, only the mind. ~*~

MorningStar
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3 posted 2013-08-14 12:27 PM


Beautiful and heartbreaking...

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2013-08-19 10:52 AM


so ... what's the 'magic secret' to receive those kind of dreams?!

lovely 'penning' indeed!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2013-08-20 07:07 AM


Dreams are a hard thing for mere mortals to live up to. Hope you're searching for perfect imperfections.


Lori  

Namyh
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6 posted 2013-08-20 05:07 PM


JamesM - The brain can mix what we've been thinking of in the back of our mind with what we've been thinking all day and manufacture a dream. It's amazing how we can feel just as alive in it as when awake. I guess it's all a matter of the strongest desires that surface for impact, like someone loved, and the brain's synaptic readiness to go to work on a dream.  Most intriquing write and I enjoyed it James. Namyh
Larry C
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7 posted 2013-08-20 09:03 PM


Still the romantic I see.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2013-09-04 10:21 PM


Thank you Krawdad, swampguy, morning star, secondhanddreampoet, Lori Namyh and Larry for the nice responses...I wrote this after thinking of the way I feel when she takes my hand and smiles at me...James
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