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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2013-07-29 10:27 PM



When Angels Come


No one wants
to lose someone
they love
but when God calls
and the angels come
it time for everyone
to let go.

Kiss your loved
ones goodby,
as they leave
this earthly
body behind
and step
into eternity.


JamesLee
27July
2013


  


    

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2013-07-29 11:07 PM


lovely thoughts, James.
                  Ida

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-07-29 11:36 PM


Yes, letting go is the loving thing to do. Very nice!

Lori

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-07-30 09:03 PM


Thank you Marchmadness and Lori for the nice responses...James
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2013-08-21 10:29 PM


When Angels Come (version 2)

No one wants to lose someone they love
but when God calls and the angels come
it time to let go.

Its time to say goodbye and let them go to
that beter place that their Heavenly Father
has prepared for them.

Kiss your loved ones goodbye as
they leave this earthly body behind
to step into Eternity.

JamesLee
21August
2013

This was supposed to be
version one but I left
part of it our by mistake.

Larry C
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5 posted 2013-08-28 12:32 PM


Thanks for the update James. Still easier said than done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2013-08-28 07:29 PM


Thanks for the nice response Larry...I suppose the first line says it all for those that lose someone they love...the love that remains and the person thats gone will be in their hearts for a lifetime...James
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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7 posted 2013-08-29 06:12 AM


Ah, if only it was that easy. Nice write.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

2islander2
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8 posted 2013-08-31 07:44 AM


very poignant and caring, thanks a lot james,


yann

EmmaRose
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9 posted 2013-08-31 09:43 AM


it's a more soothing way to let someone go knowing they are going with angels
JerryPat2
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10 posted 2013-08-31 08:10 PM


I'm not all that much into angels, James, but I am into the process of letting go. It is the natural and best thing you can do, otherwise you will be obsessed by the passing for much too long.

~*~ If they give you lined paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2013-09-04 10:15 PM


Thank you sinfully innocent, 2islander2, Emma Rose and JeryPat for the nice responses...everyone that has lost someone they love knows how hard it can be...but good thoughts can make things better...James
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