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Open Poetry #48

Of you, of me

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2013-08-07 11:52 AM

A myriad of leaves
frills the parched gaps
its quilting circles
crinkle with voices
bittersweet, winking with
Fall's preamble at the
pinnacle of Summer's love

some retain their yellow
some forsake their green
many morph then fade
their colors and burn as
embers, as such this warped
romance, bleeding out
from you, from me

swampguy
Member

since 2013-08-04

Posts 83

1 posted 2013-08-07 01:35 PM

You neatly tied in the love "of you, of me" into the dying away of the flowers in the fall of the year. Neatly done. Yes!.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2013-08-07 02:04 PM

it contains such beauty in the differing people and states of love, thats how I saw it, blended together.
RS

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2013-08-07 10:22 PM

very nice...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2013-08-08 01:31 PM

winking with
Fall's preamble at the
pinnacle of Summer's love

Your expression is so very indicative of what we secretly fear even when everything is at its best.

Very intense and beautiful.

Magherita

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