Open Poetry #48 |
Homo Sapien |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
a homo sapien I am my stay on this earth tenuous still . . . when I am alone staring up into the bejeweled night watching the stars blink and streak and write giving me messages I can actually understand I comprehend writing whether it comes to me by pen and paper or night messages only for me it is at times such as these that I feel I will forever live never to die ©June 11, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Our words will outlive us, that is for sure! Cool thought my friend!. Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes they most certainty will, Lori. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
Why Jerry, this is lovely... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lady Goodman, and thanks for the hug. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
We all die; we all live forever. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I can relate to that, Icebox. Thanks . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this one -Juju |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Juju, it is always neat to see you here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
One of your very best, Maybe the best. Jerry. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much, Ida. I am grateful to receive such thoughts from you. ~*~ Did you hear about the cross eyed teacher who lost her job because she couldn't control her pupils? ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just peeked in for a moment and your title made me wonder ... I am glad that I read your beautiful poem, Jerry. You touched the core of your (and our) being! Wonderful. Margherita |
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