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wearing silk and sigh smoke distant |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was another endless summer sunday the band was playing santana songs and the harley tin was perfumed with leather and chrome seduction she had wild hair and dark skin smoking a cohiba with her gringo in his ventura art walk shirt walking jaunty as if comfortable in her skin in that silk blouse letting things move around natural and the jeans too, were easy going how they fit her like gloving glances and I wondered about you then, and smiled ____________ daark |
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Shirley Knott New Member
since 2013-08-05
Posts 9state of confusion |
Daark, I don't believe I have ever read anything quite like what you write. I like it very much, maybe too much. Looking forward to reading more! SEK |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Shirley...thank you for the touch, I am sure you will witness more of my pen spatter. And welcome to the bluezoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love this...most of all your closing line. Made me smile too.... I'm just saying. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue...thank you lady friend...you should have been there...or maybe you were |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
a pleasure to read...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most interesting and v. well done as always! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
James....thank you ___________ Secondhand...thanks for the read |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Anyone could slip into those shoes and feel pretty  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole...thank you lady... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are the perfect scenographer, dear D. And that last line is the seductive conclusion ... when something and/or someone reminds us of someone special. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar, thank you lady friend |
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