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Pretty Little Girl
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Pretty Little Girl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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you're such a pretty little girl with soft hazel eyes you make the world stand still you are even more beautiful now than you were back then in your pretty girl years although now you are quite seasoned with scars, physically and mentally from horrors of times past the pretty little girl is still there inside you for all to see ©July 28, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Did you hear about the cross eyed teacher who lost her job because she couldn't control her pupils? ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
aww Jerry, this is so sweet! You know you spoil that woman of yours. I would suppose she had a hard time resisting your tsunami of loving romantic words. Way to go lover boy! Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much, Lori. That "woman of mine" has personality plus, she was the one who sent an overwhelming tsunami into the depths of my heart. It shook me to my core. Thank you for being here. ~*~ Did you hear about the cross eyed teacher who lost her job because she couldn't control her pupils? ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Like fine wine huh?? Really nice writing, Jp~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, it is James, yes it is ~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I'm not going to bash youth here, but so often it overshadows wisdom that comes with age .. And I agree, experience is beautiful. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your input, Kaoru. And yes, experience is a grand teacher alright. ~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
it's lovely when you can see past the grit of a life not always pretty, and still come up with a sweetness for the person |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I thank you Emma for your kind comments. ~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not only are there girls, but there are boys out there just like that, still pretty/handsome, still scarred, but doing what they can against the tide. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, you're right, my friend. They are there. ~*~ What do you call a dinosaur with a extensive vocabulary? A thesaurus. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply excellent ! |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Of course I loved this, how could I not... Aenea "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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swampguy Member
since 2013-08-04
Posts 83 |
Thank you, Bruce, I appreciate your time spent here. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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swampguy Member
since 2013-08-04
Posts 83 |
Ahhh . . . Aenea, that means so much. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'm back for a second 'read' of this one ... well writ, indeed! |
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swampguy Member
since 2013-08-04
Posts 83 |
Bruce, thank you very much. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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