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Open Poetry #48

Deserved To Be Kissed

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2013-07-25 07:42 PM

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Eventually
Life distills
To a few lines
Left behind

A note of happiness
She felt bound to share
A flow of sadness
Written down

And others can feel
The still young girl
Unwilling to lose
Her dreams

Awaiting her hero
On every tide

Helen of Troy
Watching each ship
Come in

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-07-25 10:42 PM

Every single word resonates.
Your thoughts are profound,
Captivating and so good to read.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2013-07-26 03:16 AM

Very insightful indeed.
Ida

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