Open Poetry #48 |
For Helen |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Of course It is autumn My idea of heaven Limited as I am On a bench In a park by the sea I’m sitting quietly Not at all sure What I’m doing here Yet there always have been So many things I don’t Didn’t and never will Understand Waves softly Lap apon the shore Their white crests of foam Like beautiful lines of poetry I never heard or read There then or anywhere before And of course it’s you Oh Eternal Feminine Who rises smiling So gracefully Out of the blue To take me By the heart . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And of course it’s you Oh Eternal Feminine Who rises smiling So gracefully Out of the blue To take me By the heart Oh yes, that she did, John, because your words are beautifully inspired. Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, I have no favorites on this subject - other than Helen of course. I think it's wonderful that everyone is writing to/for/about her, and beautifully so . . . so I'm just going to add this to everyone's piece so you'll know I was here, read, and experienced again, the tears for her... jimmy |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
Beautiful, John. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you for such a beautiful tribute to Helen, John. I know she touched my heart. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
touching...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
So lovely.You knew her well to have written that.jo |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
It's very beautiful, Huan! Thank you for sharing ) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am at losses for words |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You wrote it well, John. A |
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